How does this look so far?

CA Resident GPA: 3.81 Starting to study for MCAT summer 2018 Biology Major Community College transfer to Public UC 350 Hours volunteering in ICU ICU Volunteer coordinator for one year 100 Hours shadowing surgeon, pathologists, intensivists, palliative care >1000 Hours working as caregiver for paraplegic lawyer 50 hours assisting people who use wheelchairs to play soccer Strengths? Weaknesses? How to improve?
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