Advice on this Alcohol IA Write-up?

Just looking for some thoughts on how this IA explanation reads. Anything I should add, take out, or change? "In September 2018, I was charged with a complicity and an alcohol policy violation. For the complicity, I was in a room in my dorm where people were drinking, and everyone ended up getting written up. Though I was not drinking, I violated the complicity policy by not leaving the room. As a result, I attended community programming meetings and was reminded that there are ways to meet... Read more
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