Personal Statement Advice

I have drafted up and had revised my first draft of my personal statement. I find myself wanting to gear it towards emergency medicine as it is my goal in the end to be en emergency physician. I also feel like I should tie in more the experience that is the "attention getter" if you will. Though I do loop back around and tie it in at the end, I feel like it needs to be better incorporated into the whole thing. I am at about 4300 characters as of now so I have some room to add if necessary.... Personal Statement Advice
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