LOI for a Waitlist spot. Reader please?

I read an old thread about a user on here that just said **** it on his/her one waitlist spot and sent in some crazy soul-searching LOI's that were 2/3 pages long over the course of a couple months and eventually was accepted. So I'm at that point where I'm just saying **** it for my 1 waitlist spot and I wrote another letter explaining why I continue to persevere for this goal and whateva. Would anyone be willing to read it and tell me how it is? Or if it's a bit too much? Warning: It's a... LOI for a Waitlist spot. Reader please?
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