Someone pls help w/ disadvantaged portion

Can someone please tell me if the following is what the disadvantaged portion is supposed to be about? I am unsure if this will make me appear like a worse applicant? Should I make it more positive, and list the lessons I learned? My father's always been a compulsive alcoholic, gambler & abused my mother. My parents didn’t qualify for assistance, so my paternal grandmother raised me. As the son of refugees, I was the 1st to speak English & translated for my uninsured family's screenings at... Read more
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